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Toga
Posts : 62 Join date : 2016-05-23
| Subject: Akimichi Clan [Done] Thu May 26, 2016 4:08 pm | |
| Name: Akimichi Founder: [OPEN] Leader: [OPEN] Settlement(s): Minami Clan Rules:
- Akimichi must be seen eating in at least one out of every three topics/threads.
- Akimichi are usually very fat, or stalky, but as children-- they're definitely pretty fat.
- Akimichi, especially the heir to the clan's future, has Cho in his/her name.
- Akimichi members are linked to the Nara and Yamanaka. They will usually, if not always, be on the same side to avoid fighting their brothers-in-arms.
- While not required, members are encouraged to place points into the BODY and the SOUL stats, because they require both muscle and chakra to perform their clans powers.
Allies: Nara, Yamanaka Enemies: N/A About: The Akimichi clan is a noble clan that has seen many battles over the ages. They are powerful allies who manipulate the Yang Release unlike their brothers-in-arms the Nara; who use Yin. Akimichi members are known to possess great physical strength and are infamous for their ability to turn calories into chakra. The clan doesn't possess a kekkei genkai, though they developed their own secret techniques long ago to shape them into battle-ready soldiers. Their tall, stoutness, alone is very desirable in a warrior. Because of the rapid draining of their powers-- the Akimichi clan eat plenty of food to replenish themselves, in addition they carry around three pills that give them power in exchange for health. On their clothing they wear the kanji for "Food," as a tribute to their style. As chunin, Akimichi abandon their clothes in exchange for plate armor-- they've been seen with and without flak jackets around them-- and have weaponized the Bo Staff. Members of the Sarutobi clan bestow earrings to Akimichi and the Nara/Yamanaka when they reach "adulthood," at sixteen. The earrings are given to all three at once, the Ino-Shika-Cho trios. The name 'Akimichi' means 'Autumn Road'. - HISTORY OF THE AKIMICHI:
Background: Long ago the first Akimichi descended from the mountains and took himself a loving wife. She loved to make food, and the man himself, loved to eat it. He had once been a monk, one who'd study martial arts for many long hours until it was time to sleep and rest. As he grew wider, plumper, and happier with his life partner, he found his jutsu and skills to have been slipping away from him. So he trained, focused his own body, and forcibly learned to burn off calories in exchange for power. He had three sons, and he trained them in the same style. His Secret Technique would eventually spark through an entire civilization of descendants.
When the world began warring over Rangelands and Farmlands; The Akimichi were scared they'd lose their homes and so they met on the battlegrounds with the Nara and a treaty was made, a pact to link them forever as allies. The Nara were already allied with the Yamanaka so the very next day when the Yamanaka were being attacked and slain... It was the huge AKimichi soldiers that rushed in and became their reinforcements. This created a good relationship with the Yamanaka, and the first Akimichi boy to ever date outside of the clan was with a Yamanaka.
That same boy became a war hero during the feudal times and lost his life defending his beloved's family. The Yamanaka cherish what the Akimichi individual did for them and the bonds became even stronger between the clans. The Nara were geniuses at strategy and witnessed the Akimichi's raw strength first hand. They immediately found a flaw in the technique and began construction of a way to help their friend's the best way they knew how. Medicine. The drug created however, attacked not just the fatty cells for chakra, but most of the cells in the entire body as a whole. Making it a forbidden item only to be used as a last ditch effort. The Akimichi Clan accepted that gift gladly, even if it was dangerous, and now, with the wars somewhat drawing to an end. The Akimichi have settled down in Minami.
Characteristics:Akimichi are very fat, they often have red tattoos on their cheeks, and carry around special pills that allow them to release their stored chakra reserves. These pills come in three colors; Green-- Yellow-- and Red. Members of the Akimichi clan snack off more than most, with lots of their money turned towards chips or even candy bars and stuff like that. A clever way to get on their good side is to feed or even pay for their meals. Akimichi have powerful senses of loyalty and may be the friend that saves your life unexpectedly as they tend to get very powerful. All in all, Akimichi have many qualities that set them apart from other people.
- Fat
- Always Eating
- Cheek Tattoos
- Friends with Nara & Yamanaka
KKG: Butterfly Choji Mode, Multi-Size Technique, Three Colored Pills. KKG Description: This is a Hiden specific to the Akimichi, and is something that takes place in the fat of the body. Sharingan of all levels have been unable to copy it due to their body builds being different from the Akimichi-- and it is uncopyable by observation alone. This style focuses around extra pockets of energy to pull from, and the user's weight in general. Just because they're fat doesn't mean they're slow either, as they'v proved that theory wrong time and again. Plenty of this clan's Hiden jutsu make it possible to advance the target(s) rapidly. Besides their legendary multi-size technique, which should be self-explanatory, they can grow their body or limbs to massive sizes... They have the chakra pills and the Choji Butterfly Mode. The pills damage the body in a way similar to modern day chemotherapy, though, it taps into chakra in the body that can't be reached by normal means. Using this alternative causes the individual to begin undergoing changes in their body's chakra balance. The Choji Butterfly Transformation is the ultimate evolution and their most powerful technique, which they've been seen able to reach even as mere children! Akimichi tend to focus on the "Tank" role, with their bodies and jutsu, which is probably the best spot for them-- considering their extreme physical strengths. The powers of this clan can be taught to anyone-- but it's highly frowned upon. - Secret Triple Threat [Pills]:
------------------------------------------------------------------ Item Name: Spinach Pill Item Type: Pill Nature Alignment: N/A Ability/Function: Ingesting this pill refills half a clan member's chakra reservoir, and gives their BODY & SOUL stat an additional 100 Damage to ninjutsu and taijutsu -- duration is 5 posts. They may only carry one Spinach Pill at a time. They suffer 100 damage after the boost resolves. Image Description: History: The pills were designed by the Nara and their high expertise in the medical field. The pills were a gift to the Akimichi, should they need it. Green is often referred to as the most mild pill. ------------------------------------------------------------------ Item Name: Curry Pill Item Type: Pill Nature Alignment: N/A Ability/Function: Ingesting this pill refills 2/3rds of a clan member's chakra reservoir, and gives their BODY & SOUL stat an additional 175 Damage to ninjutsu and taijutsu abilities used-- duration of 5 posts. After this pill's effect resolves they take 200 Damage. They may only carry one Curry Pill at a time. Image Description:History: The pills were designed by the Nara and their high expertise in the medical field. The pills were a gift to the Akimichi, should they need it. Yellow is often referred to as the mid-level. ------------------------------------------------------------------ Item Name: Red Chili Pill Item Type: Pill Nature Alignment: N/A Ability/Function: Red Chili Pills are rumored to grant an Akimichi power one-hundred times greater than normal... Ingesting this little pill completely refills a clan member's chakra reservoir, and gives their BODY & SOUL stats an additional 300 Damage to ninjutsu and taijutsu abilities used-- duration is 5 posts. They may only carry one Red Chili Pill at a time. They suffer 450 damage after it resolves. Image Description: History: The pills were designed by the Nara and their high expertise in the medical field. The pills were a gift to the Akimichi, should they need it. The red pill is often referred to as the strongest. DISCLAIMER:Using these pills eats away the fat in the user's body /rapidly/. If used as children, they'd be lucky if they could even breathe afterwards. The special note, however, is that they lose a lot of weight after ingesting the pills.------------------------------------------------------------------
________________________________________________________________ Hiden Jutsu:Name: Human Bullet Tank Rank: C Element: Yang Skill: Taijutsu Hand Signs: N/A Description: The user grows into a huge ball and tucks in their limbs, after doing so they use chakra to propel outwards rapidly. They move 10 m/s in addition to their speed stat and deal 80 damage. This has no set range. [Multi-Size Technique Required to activate] Name: Double Human Bullet Tank Rank: B Element: Yang Skill: Taijutsu Hand Signs: N/A Description: Two Akimichi clan members team up and perform Human Bullet Tanks together, grinding anything to shreds caught in the middle. They move 10 m/s in addition to their speed stats and deal 120 damage each. This has no set range. [Multi-Size Technique Required to activate] Name: Spiked Human Bullet Tank Rank: C Element: Yang Skill: Taijutsu Hand Signs: N/A Description:The user performs The Human Bullet Tank, while wrapped in weapon's increasing the damage of a typical human bullet tank. Deals 90 damage, speed is 10 m/s in addition to their speed stat. This has no set range. [Multi-Size Technique Required to activate] Name: Butterfly Bullet Bombing Rank: B Element: Yang Skill: Taijutsu Hand Signs: N/A Description:Chakra in the shoulder blade is released like a butterfly wing. They then punch, causing 200 damage at close range. They're arm moves at their running speed stat. [Multi-Size Technique Required to activate] Name: Butterfly Choji Mode Rank: A Element: Skill: Transformation Hand Signs: N/A Description:The user converts lots of calories into chakra and this jutsu triggers automatically. Either after using 200 chakra by use of calorie control or after using the Red Chili Pill. When in this form, the user can deal an additional 200 damage to targets per jutsu for 5 posts. Name: Multi-Size Technique Rank: Varies Between D-S Element: Yang Skill: Ninjutsu Hand Signs: Ram -> Special Seal Description:This costs D-rank Chakra, and allows for the user to change their body shape by method of overgrowth, usually into a huge fat ball. Users can pay 5 chakra to upkeep and sustain it for longer. Name: Partial Multi-Size Technique Rank: B Element: Yang Skill: Taijutsu Hand Signs: N/A Description:The user makes application of their control over the body to grow any limb of the body up to a range length of ten feet, and a width of four feet across the palm. They can move their limbs 10 m/s. And deal 120 damage with any designated limb on the body. The user can pay 5 chakra to sustain it for longer. Name: Super Multi-Size Technique Rank: S Element: Yang Skill: Nintaijutsu Hand Signs: Ram -> Special Seal Description:The ultimate stage of the Akimichi's Hiden. This enables them to become giants, and the BODY stat is buffed to MASTER level, which stacks with the pre-existing BODY stat. Name: Super Open Hand Slap Rank: B Element: Yang Skill: Taijutsu Hand Signs: N/A Description: The hand gains odd-markings and glows with funneling chakra. The Akimichi must be in Super Multi-Size Mode to use this ability. Strike downward to cause a collateral 500 damage. [Super Multi-Size Technique Required to activate]
Last edited by Toga on Sat Jun 11, 2016 4:06 am; edited 4 times in total | |
| | | Saint
Posts : 97 Join date : 2016-04-05
| Subject: Re: Akimichi Clan [Done] Thu May 26, 2016 6:06 pm | |
| The jutsu will need to be made.
Please invent some sort of short backstory for the Akimichi as well.
Chakra pills will need to be made too | |
| | | Toga
Posts : 62 Join date : 2016-05-23
| Subject: Re: Akimichi Clan [Done] Fri May 27, 2016 5:14 pm | |
| Forgive me for mistakes, I'm still very new to the system and all.
Bump. | |
| | | Toga
Posts : 62 Join date : 2016-05-23
| Subject: Re: Akimichi Clan [Done] Mon May 30, 2016 7:16 am | |
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| | | Artemis
Posts : 47 Join date : 2016-04-09
| Subject: Re: Akimichi Clan [Done] Sat Jun 04, 2016 8:02 am | |
| Aloha Akimichi WOOT Decent job so far, but just a few things to point out. I think we got a little disconnect when it comes to taijutsu moves. For starters, the first thing I see is speed. If I'm a master in speed, and I use say, Human Bullet Tank, I move slower all of a sudden? That doesn't seem right, seems odd lol The second thing I see is the idea of continual effects. While taijutsu are say limited to how fast you can move, range wise, they also need to be some sort of duration. Again, taking a look at Human Bullet Tank, do you just roll in a straight line and the technique ends and you have to do it again? I would say, you need to point out how long the technique lasts for before using it again, Choji has been seen using it rolfcopter around in the mode for quite a while. Third thing, a lot of these techniques require the use first of "Multi Size Technique" or "Super Multi Size" first before able to use these techniques. Finally, if you decide to boost the users speeds (Which I recommend) make sure you follow. Also, make sure you are following the Jutsu Stat Rules - The Rules wrote:
- The following list details the amount of Jutsu Stats your jutsu get depending on their rank:
D-Rank: 50 C-Rank: 100 B-Rank: 150 A-Rank: 200 S-Rank: 300 Limited Jutsu: 350 - The Rules wrote:
- Every 100 stats allocated to the technique's potency equals to 1 basic in the respective stat which is being boosted.
Example: Example Technique has a potency stat of 200 which boosts the user's speed. The user's speed will be raised with 2 basics. Boosting is capped at Master and cannot boost the user's stat(s) further than Master (5 Basics). | |
| | | Toga
Posts : 62 Join date : 2016-05-23
| Subject: Re: Akimichi Clan [Done] Mon Jun 06, 2016 6:36 am | |
| No disrespect is intended here.
But those rules you quoted at the bottom don't accurately follow what these abilities are able to do, unless you're going to have me bump the ranks upwards, which is stupid. Because these are the canon ranks of their uses, unless they didn't have you one, in which case I did my best to judge them accordingly.
Some of these jutsu don't boost speed, so I'm not going to go through all of them and put in buffs if they're not logical. I specifically ignored buffs because the system doesn't have an accurate way of showing some of these techniques canon power. The potency distributor is kind of-- nerfing I guess?
Yeah, obviously some of these jutsu do require the use of various multi-size abilities. I shouldn't need to include that though, not in my opinion. One, because it's obvious. Two, mostly because it fluffs up the descriptions, which I was told to keep as shortened as possible.
Would you elaborate on the first two things you're saying please? No, the speed doesn't slow, if anything it stacks with the speed stat, then again, not sure what you're trying to tell me exactly either. That seems more like an 'in general' question, where I clearly don't think a jutsu would slow anyone down. If anything it would just overlay regular the speed stats. | |
| | | Artemis
Posts : 47 Join date : 2016-04-09
| Subject: Re: Akimichi Clan [Done] Mon Jun 06, 2016 8:51 am | |
| Hello,
I understand that don't 100% follow what the canonical references show, but its our job when creating jutsu to make them fit as much as possible. Using the stats given. Sometimes that means moves won't appear as strong as they migt be in canon, just part of the process.
If the jutsu doesn't boost speed, I agree, but if it does, it needs to follow the boosting rules. On this site, sonce we are creating jutsu to fit our aystem, these jutsu sorta become the canon of our site. So if you say "they move at 10 m/s" thats what they will move at, regardless of what theor speed is. So its important to be clear when you state such things.
Unfortuantly, you do need to state that it requires use first of multi or super multi size technqiue. What is obvious to you, might not be obvious to others. Again, we are sorta redoing canon jutsu to fit our stats.
So, first thing, if it stacks on users current speed, say so, and follow the boosting rules. If you say "they move at 10m/s" we will take that as they move at 10 m/s regardless of their current speed.
Second thing, how long do the techniques last before you need to pay chakra again? Basically how long in posts does the technique last? | |
| | | Toga
Posts : 62 Join date : 2016-05-23
| Subject: Re: Akimichi Clan [Done] Sat Jun 11, 2016 4:06 am | |
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